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by qualitywheat

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Ridiculous

Not erotic. Just too much and far too much over the top.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Not to my taste

Far too rushed, and perhaps would have been a possible entry for the humorous category with minimal development.

If you had taken you time to develop the plot it would have have been a tremendous story but haste, poor editing and a lack of awareness of apostrophe's (sic) make for an average story at best.

arrowglassarrowglassalmost 7 years ago
Always enjoy what you pen!

A fine fun frolicking fantasy! Isn't that what this all about?

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