by joulie
i am loving your writing style joulie,you get me horny so quickly, every one ive read has been a 5*keep them cummin xxxxx
Oh, my you've created a monster and there is no end in sight. Too bad you don't teach the young man the joys of smelling and licking those female charms. Those lovely juicy hairy openings that can kiss back as they send forth a flood. When I was young I would have loved your instruction.
for not sticking to the "round the world" formula of so many Lit stories. But I couldn't shake the notion of you typing away with tongue in in cheek. Somewhere around the umpteenth go and nteenth cum the naive horny teenager pretty much disappears and we're left with an incredible satyr feeding himself into a fucking machine. A stroker for sure and I admit I gobbled it up; old wanker that I am. But you've a richer vein of erotic creativity to mine and I look forward to that.
What a hot story. I had no trouble getting off. The only trouble was keeping my hands off my hard cock till I finished reading the story. Gale
One for the horny ladies if you ask me. Size, Libedo, recovery speed, spunky, smooth skinned, tall youth. Naive and gullible. I do Love your style, the final sentence sex tense equal of a lover promised phone call, if the coast is clear. Not my fave, disbelief.
Absolutley brilliant, just what the doctor ordered. Thanks for an amazing read.
Lovely story about a lucky lad.
I, too, had a similar learning experience at the hands of an older woman. She was 57 and I was 18. Bliss. Thank you Joulie for helping me recapture one of the most memorable experiences of my life.
A very lucky young man. Sadly, I wasn't as lucky, but I loved your story for its sense of fun and love of sex and life. Wish I'd met you ladies when I was that age...
It seems to me the luck was on both sides of the dick. I had to laugh out loud when Jack tried to corral Nanna's tits. A nice bit of levity. Writing is, as always Joulie, top drawer. Fluid and well paced.
It was entertaining, but for me rather complicated. All though we speak the same language as you across the pond, many words seem to have different meanings. And how will he ever cope with the girls of his own age again?
Fun read with a interesting take on storytelling from a different time. Thanks for sharing.
Maybe if lack got one or all of them pregnant,get his mum fucking as well.