All Comments on 'Abandoned Trail'

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Cincy58Cincy58about 4 years ago
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Thx for sharing....I enjoyed your story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Could be good

Needs more build up

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good to read but ..

The idea is good but need to be developed.

This is a fair sex story but the framework is too short. Please provide more about the characters and their relationship. Their mutual story. Sure we are on literotica but there is the first literature. It is a little boring actually.

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