All Comments on 'Abbigale's New Life Ch. 01'
by Abbigale
- 5 Comments
Anonymousover 4 years agoThis is one of the best stories I've read on here in a long time. Loved every word of it. I cannot wait for the next installment!
Anonymousover 4 years agoHoly s this it y exactly in my wheelhouse! More please good sir, I cannot wait for the continuation!
Anonymousover 4 years agoAbsolutely can't wait for the next part, hope we get to see a focus on the growth
GeezLaWeezover 4 years agoSorry, but this story was horribly paced. A lot of unnecessary exposition. RESPECT YOUR READERS
BeybladeMosesover 4 years agoI personally like that your building up the characters in the story. I'm trying to find that sweet spot of exposition and sexy time myself. Its also not an easy thing to do with so many characters at once. I love that your protagonist is getting more and more endowed as the story progresses and i cant wait to see just how big she gets down the line. All in all this was an excellent chapter that left me wanting more.
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