All Comments on 'Abby Ch. 01'

Pretty good for your first time out. I'm impressed. You did hurry into the sex thing but it worked. A little more fleshing out the characters helps too. Maybe another chapter too.

It's not often there is a good story in the interracial section. Too many are about black cock sluts, gang bangs and such. They get old real fast.

Keep writing.

This has a good start. It will be interesting to see how much help she gets once word get around that she easy. Her son’s going to get a real eye opener when the hung blackmen get working on his mom. He’ll hear noises coming from her bedroom that he never heard before. Very hot set up.

I thought it was excellent- very erotically written. And its a topic rarely addressed- the older bbc bull takes a younger white woman!

Hope it continues soon-- many avenues- such as will Jake's wife dominate? Will Jake change the white milf? How submissive will she become? Great story!

Hope this story line continues Abby's going to be wanting more of Jake

great story, needs a chapter 2 where she gets to meet other black men in the neighborhood