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All Comments on 'Abby's Adventures: Prologue'

by Gwenndolyn

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abiostudent3abiostudent3over 1 year ago

It's a good start! It feels a little bit stilted and rushed, though... What mother is going to wake up in a whole different world and go, "Oh well, I'll just worry about everything I left behind later; there's absolutely no reason to freak out or anything!"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why such a short story?

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Abby's Adventures Chapter Four was submitted today (8/3). I hope you all like it.