All Comments on 'ABC Modeling Company Pt. 02'

Loved the story. Had to give it a 4 because of the watersports, Or it would have been a 5 all day.

This is one of the best stories i have ever read on hear please keep going.

Great story hope more comes soon

I loved the line where she told him to feel free to share that kiss with the rest of the guys.

wow - fantastic. and i don't like water sports either - but the whole story works so well. You are quite the brilliant story-teller. can't wait for more!!

Verb usage should have been past tense in the narrative parts, present tense is confusing and does not work well. You need to figure out the difference between their, they're, and there. Also, the spelling is ma'am not mam.

Maybe getting a little far fetched with the military abilities. However, so far so good on the story line. Gave it a 5 for the story. Really enjoyable reading. Thanks

The Cindy thing was a huge turn-off, and so it was for Ron it seems.