by regularguy13
I thought it was going to be some sci-fi story and then....
Thanks from all of us who had an annoying, bossy, bitchy sister
Hope yes. Great plot idea, convincing execution.
Only one small potential credibility gap. Short time period for cutting films into sequence played on smartphone. Is this really feasable? Maybe the drive time was enough and the nerds super efficient. Not sure. Am not a video pro.
I can't believe after all this time this story has a 4.39. What the hell is wrong with you readers. This story was excellently written, amazing plot. The average should have been around 4.6, at least. I usually don't comment on the writing skills of the author. I read the comments and can't get over the nasty criticism. I always give 5* for their courage to post the Stories they have in their head. If it's really bad I start deducting for lower star. 4* is the lowest I'll ever go. I haven't been able to get on my profile because my computer craped out and all I have is my smart phone.
Since I can't login here is my profile name.
cobraden
The battle of the sexes takes an interesting turn in this alien abduction of some guys and girls. Kidnapped by space aliens, the girls and guys are subject to humiliation. . The story flows so well, the reader might believe the girls and guys were actually taken aboard a space craft. The ending comes as a surprise. I might have liked an ending where the gals were so duped that the guys didn't want to disclose the deception.
Saw the ending coming from a mile away and based on the number of stories with similar themes, seems like the author probably has a bit of a grudge against his own sister. Maybe try therapy instead of weird incestuous stories.