by Boxlicker101
Stanley is an interesting character. I hope you are going to write more about him.
This is an extremely interesting premise for a story and I would love to see where it could go. Definitely continue this one, but in future chapters take a little more time to flesh out the story - this one felt just a little bit rushed. Maybe that's because it's just an intro, but yeah - definitely write more chapters!
left on this story. I think I will continue with it, because it was a fun story to write, and I believe it would be just as much fun to expand on it. I should finish the next part next month sometime.
I agree with the other commentors. This has the genes for a great series.
That was half a year ago. Have you abandoned this story? I would love to read a sequel :-)
I have not abandoned the story, and have started a sequel. Other things have kept me occupied, but they are mostly done now, and I should have the next part done by the end of May. It is a fun story to write, but I don't know how long it will continue.
I loved reading this one. I'd personally prefer the climactic moments in his encounters to build up for a bit longer and seem to last a bit longer too. But awesome story overall. I haven't looked yet but I hope you have more chapters or write more soon.
Good story. Well written with few errors. Hope more is coming soon.
Thanks.
This is the second of your stories I have read. They just keep getting better.
I sincerely hope that you are not dead because I really want to read a part two for this story! Come on give us what we are begging for,will you?