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by Otto26

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Stella_OmegaStella_Omegaalmost 16 years ago
Steampunk Pulp!

This was a fun read. You have a good writing style here, very energetic, really suits the genre. I'd like to see more steampunk details in the surroundings, perhaps some archaisms in the narrative, to hold the atmosphere.

I'm looking forward to the next episode!

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