All Comments on 'Abigail In Trouble Ch. 19: Payback'

This story was way too long

Hey, when your writing about the male genitalia, or any genitalia, stiff poles of flesh is very clingy and gross, just use dick, cock, penis.

The words; squeals, shrieks, spunk, their tools, squeak, etc, are really not sexy.

You could say moans, cum, penis, instead of the overuse of pumping, you could use thrusting, and the same goes for flesh, use skin. It starts to sound like a horror story instead of a smutty story

please continue! love this series

Seeing Abigail turn the tables on Emma was a nice touch.

Can't wait for the next chapter...

please continue this!