All Comments on 'About Time'

Very good first story. Interesting concept. Time travel without consequence. And with mom. The possibilities are exciting.

Time travel without consequence? Everything stays in the past?

Hmmmm, wonder if she's bringing something back after being with her dad. Guess we'll have to wait and see. Good start to the series!

It was good but I wanted her to go back to when she was younger, still too young to be doing such things and then be with her dad. Maybe next time?!

One thins for YOU... its "trial" a trial room where you TRY ON clothes... you used the word "TRAIL" as in "we walked up the hiking trail to the mountain top"!! PLEASE edit your story to change the word. It is VERY distracting from the story! thanks,

Thanks for the comments.

you did ending it by saying - gonna continue doing more [ however though ] haven't bothered haven't cared

" after the one person mentioned mishap mentioned mishaps " ............

it's now been borderline close yr . we've still gotten nothing . UNLESS THEIR SUSPENDED ANIMATION \

UNLESS THEIR CRYOGENIC STASIS \ UNLESS THINGS BECOME SAID ON YR PASSED NOW

: POINTLESS CONTINUE