by tomlitilia
A brilliant piece of writing. Please bring us more! Five stars for all parts.
Have to agree with the two earlier comments. This story has been absolutely red hot! Everything about it has been incredible. I can safely say it's my favourite series here on Literotica. Fantastic writing, story and characters. 5 stars are not enough.
Such a perfectly crafted fantasy story. Perfect characters, perfect pacing and some thrilling scenes of lesbian domination/submission. Really well written too. Can't wait to find out how this first story (am really hoping there will be a sequel) ends. Hope Jennifer stays under Hannah's control. Every chapter so far has been well worth the full 5 stars - am sure the finale will be no exception.
Thanks everybody! The last chapter is scheduled to be posted tomorrow
Such a fantastic job so far. Struggling to think how exactly this series could possibly get any better. I appreciate the fact that all parts were likely completed before you began posting, but even so, to maintain this level of quality and consistency across all three chapters is an impressive effort.
Have really enjoyed this time in the company of Jennifer and Hannah...two very memorable characters. Was particularly pleasing to see the otherwise perfectly calm and poised Hannah lose her composure a little when enjoying Jennifer's body. It shows that she's every bit as addicted in her own way. A nice added dimension to the storytelling.
Can't wait to read the...climax!
Stallsy.