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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was cute! I laughed AND got hard. Job well done!

bienclarbienclarover 1 year ago

I enjoyed this. It was well written and definitely hot (5 stars) but if I was your editor I’d tell you to significantly dial back the use of italics and bold. They lose their impact when they’re used so liberally.

SebastianApolloSebastianApolloover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you all for the very kind words, I appreciate it!

@bienclar Yes, I know the overuse of special characters is a bad habit of mine. Thankfully, my current work (that's in Pending) has cut down on them considerably.

@CasualWanderer82 Thank you, I was apprehensive if I was able to both juggle the comical and sexual portions well, but I think I did a good job at it!

sealandssdsealandssdover 1 year ago

We love stupid hunks!

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“There are worse things in the world than a boy who likes to kiss other boys.” - Benjamin Alire Sáenz INTRODUCTION: I’ve always been writing throughout my entire life - short stories, novels, scripts, and whatnot. Never anything good enough to actually be published, but I en...