All Comments on 'Abuse and Revenge'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
A WCJ story

1*

chytownchytownalmost 10 years ago
Thanks For Sharing***

Interesting read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Well that was just stupid

How long do you think it took for them to heal up, do a little planning and kill them all? Andy died a very painful death. She might have survived but her life in a South American whore house didn't last long. And the tattoos could have been removed in lots of places they would never have heard about. Dumb plot. Stupid actions. Ridiculous story. Just awful.

tazz317tazz317about 8 years ago
RAKES SHOULD KNOW THEIR LIMITATIONS

in dalliances with their peers and lords, Because. TK U MLJ LV NV

kiteareskitearesover 5 years ago
All a bit silly

OK First thing, did Andy not question her staying at a hotel with Dale? 90 minutes to round up the boys and get there means it was close enough to get home that night. Especially after being in Europe for a while, the perfect husband would want time with his perfect wife. Sorry Dale, tough shit, not tonight.

Call Andy, get him to call the police all evidence is there. Destroy Dale and the brothers and let the internal prison system deal with the scum they are. This way she would not be raped once more.

THEN have them visited after they leave prison (as we know fantasy resources are limitless).

Sorry too many plot holes, too many conveniences, it could have been very good, but was too rushed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

The comments are hilarious people are mad that she got her own back lol her being raped an abused seems to require no comments slightly worrying for humanity

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

All these idiotic comments, ITS FICTION!!!

Damn people get a life.

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