by Viali7
I like and write brief stories. You got down to business quickly then drew it out some. Well done!
A good story BUT how did he " spraying rope after rope of white fluid against her pink walls" when wearing condom? Attention to details Viali7, attention to detauils.
Strange how he starts wearing a condom, but by the end he's filled her ass with cum !! consistency would be good.
Good news: nice fantasy and a solid description of a prodigious buttfucking
Bad news: the condom thing completely ruined it for me.
Thanks for the feedback in the comments, I fixed the continuity issue and reuploaded. Hope you like the new version! :D