by daveball500
Waiting for more chapters on this one. Perhaps little less persnal comments within the story and more story instead, otherwise let's get to the next chapter(s).
I thought the story contained a bit of uniqueness to it. I didn't like the all caps for his thoughts.All caps are hard to read for some people so keep that in mind. I'd love to read the next chapters!
I wish I could get some of that compound X. I think would come in handy while I'm fucking some insatiable girl.
Very good story, had amazing story development not just sex. Its a 10 star story if I could give it.
if you can get it and your client is up to his... in exciting work. the women know their roles and I can't to see the treatment for the incest issues of the dad and daughter.