All Comments on 'Accepted Ch. 04'

Please continue, loved reading this with my boyfriend, got us both hard and had to relieve each other a couple times as we read this

This general theme has been used by a few authors but I'm really enjoying your writing and am looking forward to seeing where you take Sasha next.

I like how circumstances are slowly forcing our heroine down a road of self-discovery to her true self. I hope she eventually finds a loving boyfriend who shows her that being a girl and letting go of her past hangups is okay

While you spoiled us by releasing the first three chapters in one week, this fourth chapter was well worth the wait. Looking forward to future chapters.

love this series, can't get enough of it.

I get you're using it as a plot device, but I find it a poor choice. I really love this story (or I wouldn't be so critical).

I can't wait to see other places this story can go. When's the next chapter coming?

I don't think it's that poorly explained.

It seems perfectly reasonable to me that one of these girls, fresh from high school and on her own for the first time, would be uncomfortable sharing a room/living space with someone who was sexually attracted to her.

If anything it made the story more real than they typical "everyone is okay with every bizarre story element all the time, no questions asked" and using it as a driving force for our protag to *actually* have a gay encounter is clever irony.

Though whether or not it's 'actually gay' depends on if you think Sasha is truly trans.

See how much more depth that one bit of negativity gave this story?

To the author. Don't be dissuaded by the negative comments of a few. This is a wonderful story. I think Alex's attitude while a bit close-minded makes perfect sense given the situation. Furthermore, her homophobic behavior provides a logical plot device to move forward Sasha in her transition. Keep it going.

I really hope to see more. It's neat seeing Sasha's transformation and I love the characters. I love this story, it's very sexy and with a good premise. Alex's words hurt a little bit, but it's definitely good for this story.

So I’m a trans girl and a lesbian, and I just have to say that Alex’s homophobia seems weird to me. In my experience, cis girls are more likely to take more issue with the fact that I’m trans than the fact I’m a lesbian. Or it’s because I’m trans and a lesbian, which isn’t seen as a real thing by a lot of people. And I’m kind of disappointed that you had Sasha pivot from being a trans lesbian to being bi or pan.

That being said, these complaints are pretty minor and I still love this story and intend on reading it further.

I love Sasha and would like to hear more about her experience

I love the story but seriously Alex is a downer to the whole thing... she’s obviously homophobe I’d get rid of her somehoe

When are you going to post the text?

This story. I doubt it will have additional chapters but have seen soon dories from authors that have up to 7 years between a chapter.

If it did continue, since it’s about 2 1/2 years since the 4th chapter. It would be interesting to see if it continued from there, final or second to last simester before getting out in the world. Or if it’s continued later, a reminiscence of college after graduation... anyway keep up the great work

Will you continue this story? I hope so. It is one of my favorites on this site.

Thank you, I loved all 4 chapters. Please consider continuing Sasha's story, but thank you again even if not 🤗

I wish this happen to me,this is a hot story more please !

Thank you for such a beautiful story! I loved it! It's now one of my top 3 (including books and stuff). Please keep it alive!

I love the sensitivity, the details, and how close it is to reality in many ways!

As a transgender woman, I can tell you, that you've mentioned many things no one else does and that I have experienced and continue experiencing. Thank you again for your time and dedication. I hope we get to hear from you again.