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All Comments on 'Accidental Love Ch. 01'

by Lovewriter99

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Could be a good story

Those one page part stories totally spoil reading them

Make your chapters much longer

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
promising start

Saw the curmudgeonly comment by the other person & thought I'd be a bit more positive ... I liked it, promising start, the length was ok. Could do with better capitalisation, though not too many spelling mistakes, and the sentences seemed ok.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
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Good beginning. Longer chapters would be nice. Please continue the story!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Keep on writing. A good start and interesting characters so far.

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