by Djmac1031
Thanks for this great story. Since I see this as a great start for a nice love story, I would really appreciate further parts where things slowly develop between them.
Maybe just a Part 2, to continue. I'd like to know that they develop an ongoing relationship. With appropriate benefits.
Ok, I’ll be that other guy. I agree that you should drop it right here and let all the readers who enjoyed the story (definitely ME) imagine our own next chapter. You move on and give us yet another well thought out, well written story that we will enjoy, like you proposed! Win Win!
I know others want the story to go on but I thought it was entirely complete. Sometimes less is more.
Would love a sequel, but don't want to be greedy. :) It's a nice, stand-alone story, if you choose to leave it at that.
Thanks!
Nice story and nice development. I kinda like the idea of it not going on. I like to sit in the wonder. Thanks for offering that.
Enjoyable short story, well written and erotic. Unlike the other commenters I think it’s best left there - nothing you could add would improve it.
Awesome story, loved it! And I agree with the others, it is perfect as a one-chapter entry. Sometimes I like to read short stories that are just a happy accident, a one-off event for the characters. Makes it seem more real. I will read this one often.
They both enjoyed themselves and got what they needed.
I agree, leave the rest to our imagination.
Another 5 stars buddy, good one! ;->
Brilliant story. Very well-written and totally exciting.
Every man's dream from my point of view.
I can understand if you don't wish to continue - but I will in my mind.
What a delicious secretary....ha ha
This was a very sexy story. In some ways, I'd like a follow-up (they're both such attractive people - inside and out!) but you might be right about leaving it just where it is - so we can take it... in so many delicious directions. Thanks for an erotic encounter that I'll think about again - many times. An easy five stars.
Leave it alone. Excellent ending. My mind can make up the rest of the story. Five stars.
Loved it very much… 5 stars! I think you should leave it alone now and let me think of their future. Please write more of these thought provoking stories.