All Comments on 'Accidental Nudes'

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KarotteKarotteover 1 year ago

Thanks for this great story. Since I see this as a great start for a nice love story, I would really appreciate further parts where things slowly develop between them.

RedMockersRedMockersover 1 year ago

Maybe just a Part 2, to continue. I'd like to know that they develop an ongoing relationship. With appropriate benefits.

dellbertdellbertover 1 year ago

Please carry it on

ChopinesqueChopinesqueover 1 year ago

It could go on nicely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ok, I’ll be that other guy. I agree that you should drop it right here and let all the readers who enjoyed the story (definitely ME) imagine our own next chapter. You move on and give us yet another well thought out, well written story that we will enjoy, like you proposed! Win Win!

DanOSteelDanOSteelover 1 year ago

I know others want the story to go on but I thought it was entirely complete. Sometimes less is more.

ArediaArediaover 1 year ago

Would love a sequel, but don't want to be greedy. :) It's a nice, stand-alone story, if you choose to leave it at that.

Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice story and nice development. I kinda like the idea of it not going on. I like to sit in the wonder. Thanks for offering that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoyable short story, well written and erotic. Unlike the other commenters I think it’s best left there - nothing you could add would improve it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Perfect as it is. No need to continue.

SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfunover 1 year ago

So well written. And I agree, it's perfect as it is.

solarex1solarex1over 1 year ago

Awesome story, loved it! And I agree with the others, it is perfect as a one-chapter entry. Sometimes I like to read short stories that are just a happy accident, a one-off event for the characters. Makes it seem more real. I will read this one often.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 1 year ago

They both enjoyed themselves and got what they needed.

I agree, leave the rest to our imagination.

Another 5 stars buddy, good one! ;->

HardBenHardBenover 1 year ago

Brilliant story. Very well-written and totally exciting.

Every man's dream from my point of view.

I can understand if you don't wish to continue - but I will in my mind.

What a delicious secretary....ha ha

djripdjripabout 1 year ago

So two wrongs do maka a right...

MOVINGON1941MOVINGON1941about 1 year ago

I think that this may be the most erotic story that I have ever read.

Dutchlynx77Dutchlynx7712 months ago

This was a very sexy story. In some ways, I'd like a follow-up (they're both such attractive people - inside and out!) but you might be right about leaving it just where it is - so we can take it... in so many delicious directions. Thanks for an erotic encounter that I'll think about again - many times. An easy five stars.

joeoggijoeoggi11 months ago

Leave it alone. Excellent ending. My mind can make up the rest of the story. Five stars.

MarciDMarciD10 months ago

Loved it very much… 5 stars! I think you should leave it alone now and let me think of their future. Please write more of these thought provoking stories.

Photomaker59Photomaker599 months ago

Excellent! You could not have done a better job at writing this.

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMike6 months ago

That was probably one of the most fun reads I've run across to date.

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Just a guy with a vivid imagination. I've always loved reading erotic stories, figured I'd try writing my own. You'll probably start noticing my particular kinks and recurring themes as my stories progress. Conversations welcomed, feel free to leave comments or send PMs....