All Comments on 'Accidental Penetrations Ch. 09'
by MrIllusion
- 27 Comments
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoThen it is either time to follow dear old dad's misadventures, or for Dustin to have some accidental penetration with attractive strangers.
Or both of those.
Anonymousalmost 5 years ago45 stars !
I’ve been reading them over the last two weeks. The story line is amusing and erotic !
I also liked that they were just two pages, one is too short and three or more start to drag on.
There’s still a few more stories there. Keep writing please !
Anonymousover 4 years agoI wonder if some of them get pregnant, after all he came into them, he should take responsability XD Don't put the father, one hero is enough. Good story, keep it going.
Rapier875about 4 years agoBut you really need a concluding chapter where he and Katee drive off into the sunset and live happily ever after...........
Rapier
Seekingfun13almost 4 years agoLove this. One of my favorite series. Period. Just needs at least one or 2 more chapters
ausvirgoalmost 4 years agoIt would have been better if the set-up was done a bit better.
While Erica set's Dustin up for a repeat encounter and instead goes camping, there's just nothing to indicate that Leanna would be in the same room that Dustin expected to find Erica in. Apart from her deliberately standing Dustin up for no apparent reason, there's nothing to suggest that Erica was setting up a switch, and nothing to suggest that Leanna knew that Dustin expected a tryst with Erica. The most likely scenario would have been that Dustin encountered an empty room, not Leanna.
I know that these are lighthearted, highly improbable scenarios, however the other chapters indicate that you could have done a better job here, even if it had meant taking longer to post. Perhaps having Leanna accidentally overhear Erica's encounter with Dustin when she sets him up for a repeat tryst that she won't be attending. It would also have been nice to have some explanation for Erica standing him up.
BTW, this series seems like it would make for a great erotic video.
Rancher46about 3 years agoWow, what a great series. I agree with the other comments, another few chapters would be great. 5 stars.
DrewADMover 2 years agoGreat series. Loved it. Hopefully there will be more. So many strings to play out that I would love to read.
MADDOGINTEXASover 2 years ago**5** Stars...Again!! This is a totally mind-blowing series, well-thought-out, well-written, NASTY, NASTY, NASTY!!
Please write more; this is the 2nd time I have read this series, it is better this time, bit still leaves me feeling there is/should be more!! And we can see that each of the ladies involved have more to share with Dustin, and each other...
Ssssoool...write another sequel; even better, a number of new chapters!
Anonymousabout 2 years agoNext story, he still has one girl, and a threesome with Leanna and Tessa, and her husband with it. At least another 10 stories, I can think off...
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoThis series is just silly enough for a chuckle, but the sex is fucking hot!! You’re describing fantasies I had about my cousins and aunts as a young teen till today! Love this series! Keep up the great work! All 5’s on every chapter.
greasedsilverover 1 year agoOkay, three years and three months later, still no ending?
C'mon now, we can only sit here waiting so long!
You took your break now give us, your fans, a break and finish at least one. Preferably this one, but, I'm not picky.
Anonymous6 months agoI love all 9 parts and wish you would've kept going to the finish
We need to know if he gets Milana and if the dad is in on it and then if during another hot tub night they all just decide to go for it together, please for the love of God finish this series
Anonymous3 months agoYour 'Accidental Penetration' story is indeed improbable, but since well written and well told it was still a great deal of fun to read. I only wish it had contained a threesome with the mom and aunt.
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