All Comments on 'Accidental Valentine'

Loved it. Thanks.

Incredible story. Really enjoyed it

Just the greatest story! Would have liked to see the weasel’s comeuppance, of course, but it really wasn’t necessary. Thank you for writing this! 😊

Loved it

Too bad this did not make it into the Valentine contest, it would have done very well. Still a great story love the writing.

Really liked this!

A sequel for this story could work. The cheaters certainly deserve their retribution. However, It might be a bit harder to write.

Please, please more!!!!

Wonderful little story. Love can develop in places and in circumstances one never expects.

More!

Loved reading how they fell in love. And it was hot, too!!! Would love to read more on these two.

Just found this when I was going through your stories and really enjoyed it.

Your writing is excellent and captures emotions beautifully. The sex scenes too are very erotic and the whole story is written with thought and consideration.

I'm off to read more of your writing.

Thank you

That was a fun and engaging story. Pleased continue to compose the next chapter~

Extremely well done, will you PLEASE do chapter two? PLEASE? PRETTY PLEASE? J

Please tell me there's more. Loved this story so much. Five Big Stars!!!

Beautifully written! I'd love to read more and see what happens next!!!

Keep going. Pt 2...3...4...

Absolutely no need for a continuation for this story. That would just be a repeat of great Sex.

No, focus on another story instead. Cause with the way you built the story and characters I'm certain you can pull another one off.

would be nice for a follow up . kind of the way my late wife &I got started . we were married on Valentines day. we had 27 of them before she passed.

You've touched all the bases that matter.

Beginning, Middle, and End....all in place!

What a great story, nicely written with good believeable characters and such well Described sex, looking forward to more from you.

I really love this! I do so enjoy a good romance. It didn’t feel rushed and I remembered beautiful nights that I’ve had a while back. I’ll be reaching for this one again when I just want something sweet. Thanks for sharing!

Strong as lye soap! 5

Just so damn good!...Thanks!

Second time I've read it, just after the one, also wonderfully romantic, that you sent in for the Halloween contest. Please keep writing them.

Wonderfully romantic, just like your Halloween story. More please.

As an author, it's very gratifying to read so many positive comments about one of my stories. I'm working on finishing off a few others, but I have new romances I'm working on, too, that I'm hoping you'll enjoy as much as Holly and Keith's story. Thank you for reading my work and for your very kind comments.

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Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

So very good - what a perfect accident!

This is the third story of yours that I’ve read. My only problem with this one is, I only wished the story continued on with him meeting her family and they actually got married in the wedding dress that she got made. But there again you might do a follow on, there’s so much more to this story that you could do. But still another ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...

Super sweet story and sooooooo hot!!!

Just wish it was a little longer so we could see her ex reaction when he realised she’s dumped him and moved on

But can't help pointing out that Casa Blanca is a house. The largest city in Morocco, and setting for the movie of the same name, is Casablanca ;<)

I changed it to Casablanca on the original once I'd caught it, unfortunately after it had been published. But I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

I'll add my voice to those that wouldn't mind seeing a follow up on this story...

I suppose you chose to put it into Erotic Couplings rather than Romance because of the fact that the story plays out over just one day (more or less), rather than spanning more of the relationship?

Anyway, another great story as is.

Very well done.

So, where is the second part of the story?

Where can I upvote clearcreek's comment?

So good, awesome love story, 5 stars

Please another chapter to finish this off. Her ex needs to get his comeuppence, so does his. A wedding would be nice.

Lovely story; short, sweet, hot and fulfilling at the same time. Well done!

Fantastic and romantic love story, well done.

Superb story!!! Loved the Casablanca movie reference...

(5/2/2022) This was a wonderful read. Although I would have enjoyed some conflict with the ex and the family. But that's me. It's still wonderful as is. Thank you, for submitting for our enjoyment. Five stars,

Very good story. Sometimes it just happens… thanks I thoroughly enjoyed this read!

Know what?? You are the best freaking writer ever! Love your stories. Love your style. Well done!

Right back at you, Billyboy1953. You rock. And thank you all for your kind comments. So glad you enjoyed this story!

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Cheers,

Smuttyandfun

6*

Would be nice to follow up - great story

Exactly what it needed to be for a valentines day story

4 stars because the way she handled telling her banshee mother was pathetic!!

She should have called her father!

OMG... this needs to be a series... Write your own smutty romance novel with these two... The two-timing asshole getting his due, them getting married, or whatever... I would read the shit out of that...

A really good story but it needed a part two at least. You really left it hanging.

Excellent, thanks!

Dumb Holly should have called her father not her bitch mother!!

Too abrupt an ending

To echo what others have said, this story really deserves a part II (or even III). Please consider it.

Very nice! And like any classical happy ever after story, it does NOT need a sequel going on and on about how hunky dory 'ever after' actually was. That is NOT how romance stories work, sorry guys..

What an amazing story! So sweet, so charming, and so incredibly sexy!

The plotline and characters were believable, as was the dialogue. I found myself rooting for them both to experience something extraordinary. And they did.

Well done, S&F! You are indeed a great storyteller.

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