All Comments on 'Accidental Whore'

Not even slightly believable. Maybe if she had been more desperate for cash, or at least been a bit less easy to convince the first time? As is, it's just a teenager's fantasy, and not a very hot sex scene for even that.

She should change jobs and work the Kimberly inn full time.

I think she went into prostitution too easily, but other than that this was a fun story to read. 5stars.

Not a classic but a good fun read to pass a few minutes. Just the right length for the tale you wanted to tell.

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As for the anonymous comment about not being believable of course it’s not. It’s fiction. Obviously a 1-bomber. Ordinarily I’d have given you a 4 but because of that comment it’s a 5.

Who doesn’t want to be a whore for a night? (I’m too old for three nights! LOL)

Fun story—keep writing!

I loved it - maybe she will change her mind and stay here for a while.

I enjoyed the understated humor. If you accept the premise of this brothel in the first place, then the decision by Natalie to stay a couple extra days makes perfect sense. The story establishes that she's not a prude, hadn't been chaste in the past, and enjoyed sex. Why not live her fantasy?

Wow, it's dream come true like situation.

Will be happy to offer 3 days there 😉

A lovely short that has gentle sex and happy outcomes