by Incoming
yeah this guy has a certain style and if you don't take it seriously, it's funny.
Incoming, please come back! LW needs you more than ever. The cucks, IR fetish girlies, and creampie lovers have taken over. Save us Incoming.
In the intro the author says he's no wimp. Huh! He walks in on his wife doing another guy and he slinks away because he doesn't know how long it's been going or to what extent. Who cares? How many times would she have to cheat and for how long before a real man throws them both out? Seeing her then and there would have been enough for me!
Then we have the holes. He never saw the guy before but he knows the guy's name?
Just then I heard Bob scream. How did he know the guy's name was Bob? I thought the PI gave him the guy's name.
From there it just gets silly!
I like reading good stories a second and third time. But I just have to say that there is an error on the last page where it states: "With that Cherry dropped to her knees, "unzipped my cock", and started sucking like there was no tomorrow". Wow! Where was I when those zippers were issued? Just poking a little humor here.
Again good story.
There are a lot of cheated-on husbands out there who might consider this a manual on how to love your cheating wife!
Seriously, doesn't the whole neighborhood know she's cheating? Isn't she trying to get away with it? Has anyone ever heard of stealth? This husband must have been the last person for 4 or 5 blocks to find out his wife was screwing around. Let's try something believable next time.
Warning with a grain of salt. ;-} Signed: BTW
I like this authors story's, 5 stars. I'm still laughing. 5 more stars.
I like this authors story's, 5 stars. I'm still laughing. 5 more stars.
Writes like adolescent...stories are like those written by a 13/14 year old...no structure...no body development and most important ...no ending...that kills a good story and fucks a poor one...that’s his problem..all his endings leave u with a sour taste..unfinished...like the last pages of an interesting novel have been torn out...unless u can really finish your stories logically rather then in a hurry to end ...u will remain mediocre...
Most of these authors stories if one reads u will find him constantly alluding to his not being a wimp...he is a man of action ...he has big bras balls and all the other shit...but his writings show nothing but a cuck and a wimp...forget brass balls...looks more like balls of jelly...and a limp dick...nothing manly..also his stories are devoid of any passion in the writing...I can get that more reading a washing machine operating manual!!
Shooting someone in the nuts with rock salt from 3-5 feet away would be fatal. A total break (you word) failure in a Lexus would arouse suspicion in the police. That's of course, after the wife totally missed the 'Brake' warning light and the automatic transmission would actually engage with zero pressure in the brake system.
You condone murder ans torture, don't you... you pityful jerk?
PS. Read what Legio... has to say - he is absolutely right you know!!!
I dunno... When the author mentioned about not liking wimpy cuckolds, I think that should apply to staying married to the cheating wife as well but it certainly wasn't in this case.
"" But when I got their, I was just too tired from a long week so I just stood there staring at the horizon."" THERE
'Note to readers: For those of you that didn't like it, you were warned not to read it. But you couldn't control yourself, could you? You just had to read.'
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No, actually we just expected something better. You know, like cars with 'brakes' rather than 'breaks'. Guys getting shot in the balls with salt from close range with a .12-gauge who don't bleed out? (At closer than 20-25 feet, rock salt is almost as effective as buckshot.) We expected some closure, so resolution and a hint of a plot. So, shame on us for not heeding your warning.
Your stories just don’t have it in you!! They feel like someone cooked without adding spice! Tasteless! U just don’t have it in u to finish! They feel wimpy…sodden and outright ballless!
Rock salt at close range would blow a good size hole in a person! Don't write about that which you know little of.
I liked it. Don't know about all the comments about rock salt at close range. I just thought Bob got his balls blown off and laid there bleeding until until he died good for him.
Fun story. I just want to know why most of the negative comments are by "anonymous"
posters.
Must be either the creampie eating brigade, or entitled women.