by kinkybunny123
Really nice story. It does have some spelling/ grammar errors. I think it would have been good to have the mega bitch taken care of instead of her robbing him blind. I’d have thought that expulsion from the pack and becoming a lone wolf would have been enough of a punishment for him not fulfilling any part of the contract. It would also be a huge slap in the face to Lana that he would prefer banishment than mating her.
There’s huge potential to take the story further too.
Thanks for sharing
Tess (uk)
yeah, UK person, I didn't want Lana taken care of because real life is not like that. Lanas get their princess things and the Josies have to work at Dennys'. Josie has true love though!
Interesting story, especially the concept of immortal werewolves. That is new to me, at least.
Also, "Fine...whatever. I love you too." sounds like a long relationship. Haha!
Him cheating on her ruined the whole story and build up of them loving each other.