All Comments on 'Accountant Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Feint should be faint

It could be that you Brits spell things different than we Yanks, but a feint ain't a faint.

Beatnic_jazzmanBeatnic_jazzmanover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank you.

Pollyanna will be glad to hear that that's the only fault you can find in it.

ReiDeBastosReiDeBastosabout 11 years ago
I didn't care for the gimmick

...of the protagonist being a LitE author. It was more distracting than it was helpful to the story,

And nothing about the characters or the plot has me interested in reading subsequent chapters. Sorry.

maddictmaddictover 9 years ago

Fun story, like the writers part, thats become more prevolent on tv, except for californication on showtime hank moody what a tired character.

Your stories are a nice length and easy to read and follow. What great site this is and has gotten me back to reading, the exception is thereopening page, stories should be the head liner and other sites further down.

Thanks I will finish this story today I, m sure

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