All Comments on 'Ace of Hearts Ch. 03'

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filovebugfilovebugabout 2 years ago
This story is amazing

I’m fully hooked. The chemistry between them, the unstoppable force of it, reminds me of Bent/Bent Backwards, another one of my favorite stories on here. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

So hot and twisted. Intense make outs and handjobs in your mom’s backyard when your sister arrives is quite dangerous. The fact that Asa licked up Jonny’s cum from his hand and then his own precum in the bathroom video is incredibly HOT!

BlowPopJBlowPopJabout 2 years ago

Oh damn, before meeting Asa he was going to propose?! Damn damn damn *Florida Evan's voice*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

"After tonight. After tonight it stops." LOL! That's what his conscience is saying, but his cock has other plans. Cheating isn't right and it never ends well but this is so fucking HOT! Can't wait for chapter #4. Thanks, MLF

geemeedeegeemeedeeabout 2 years ago

HOT. HOOOOTTTTTT. My God. I’m jealous of fictional characters.

Everybody needs to break up with everybody, and Jonny probably won’t be allowed back in his mom’s house, lol. (At least not for family gatherings.)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Ooo. OOOOOOOO. This is great. This is almost too good. Please, please, please continue this series!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Awesome. Can’t wait to see what the guys decide to do with the gals.

thesebeadsofsweatthesebeadsofsweatabout 2 years agoAuthor

I wish I could respond directly but I totally get why I can’t. But @filovebug that is the highest praise! It’s literally because of that story I’m here—I was so mad to see it end. I hope it’s not too derivative haha. But I’m excited because now I know I can peruse your favorites list for a hella good time!

carmelcookeecarmelcookeeabout 2 years ago

This keeps getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Burning desire & racking regret. Very well done, very well indeed.

Worth more than a five, I believe.

Keep up the good work.

DOUGout

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