All Comments on 'Ace of Hearts Ch. 05'

Damn I hurt for those two and the poor girls have no idea.

Thank you for the update! This is becoming one of my favourite stories this year.

My heart is breaking, i do hope for a happy ending🤞

Pleaseeeeee keep it coming, I’m literally so obsessed w this series. I check for updates every few hours. It’s like crack and I need my fix.

Amazingly true to life. Amazingly!

Please let them have a happy ending, our hearts can't handle this

Oh my God, that gutted me. This story is fantastic. I have no clue how our guys will get an HEA and not destroy Veronica (still think Tara is cheating) but I have faith it will happen.

Well you sure were right about the hot mess! But I loved it, it was bound to happen - and no one but Rob even knows yet, so there’s gonna be much more fallout. Jonny’s guilt and stress and confusion is certainly breaking him down and making him behave like an asshole. He’s taking it out on Asa, on Tara, on Rob, on Vivi, and mostly on himself! So much hurting. Can’t wait to read what is next. Btw, Rob seems like a true and trusted friend!

My Monday just got better … literally I skimmed through because I gotta go for work however I’m smiling to really sit and read and be blown away by all these feelings …. I’m feeling it for Asa though. U gotta rewrite this and based it off Asa’s perspective caz this series is HOT!!!!! Your writing technique is amazing keep it up. I’m looking forward for more juicy stuff from you.

Holy moly. That was intense. So loving this story!!

This is a very sexy, compelling story, but I have several questions: 1) Was this also Asa's first gay experience? I think that needs to be revealed. Also, as a straight woman, I have been wondering if all the stories of "straight" men suddenly turning gay are a real thing. Moreover, do most seemingly straight men really have suppressed homoerotic urges, as so many of these stories suggest? Looking forward to gaining further insight.

OMG, OMG, OMFG!!! You weren't kidding, a hot mess and then some. I don't think I could have read about them having sex in this chapter. My brain would have probably exploded with all the rest of this shit going on. Tara is going to be hurt and veronica is going to be devastated when the truth comes out. But Asa and Jonny not ending up together would reck all of their lives. Damn, I don't know how I'm going to be able to wait for chapter #6 after this one. Intense, intense, intense!!! Thanks, MLF

I love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter :

I read the first chapter the day it hit. Picked back up today. I can’t explain that this is so effing good it hurts. Kinda of art imitating life blah blah Just depressed for them

I’ve burst into tears too with my comforter over my head. Felt this one