All Comments on 'Ace of Hearts Ch. 08'

Great plot. Great writing. Great everything.

Your rich story telling has me so invested in these characters and I feel like their story has only just begun. Thank you for sharing your words with us.

I wasn't expecting this much of a rap up after chapter #7. I figured veronica wouldn't stay angry forever, siblings this close never do. But you tied everything up beautifully. I was imagining you writing this with tears rolling down you face just like mine were when reading it. And of course, ending the story with the Hot sex was pretty nice too. You're very talented and I hope I get to read more stories written by you. Thank you for this one. MLF

Loved every word🥰

Bravo!! I loved everything about this story, the humor, the dialogue, the hot sex! Favorited Author! Very much looking forward to more stories from you!

Yet again awesome sex scene. When a reader reads a sex scene and holds their breath without knowing until they exhale. You know it’s good. I loved this chapter. A puppy. Awwww. So cuteeee. A great end. I’m gonna miss this. It’s the 10/10 for me ….

Very well done and realistic way forward for Vivi and Jonny. I loved every bit of this excellent story. Asa and Jonny have their HEA. Crossing fingers you’ll write this from Asa’s point of view. Would read anything you write, though, so crossing my fingers there is more to come from you!

So good. Sorry it has to end.

Love these two! So hot and sexy, both of them. I love that they are vers and flip each other. Very glad they ended up together. Happy that Vivi is coming around although surprised it took an entire year! Please bring us more. You are excellent.

I love this story, I’m sad that this is the last chapter. This is one of the few stories on this website that genuinely made me feel like we should be charged money to read it, it’s that good. Please keep writing! Excited to see what you come up with next.

Fantastic!! More please!

Fun, sexy. Plenty of intrigue.

Loved this story from start to finish! Well done!

I’m usually not a fan of cheating stories and how they started with each other was fucked up…BUT…the intensity they had for each other was hot. I’m glad they worked out.

OMG this was such an amazing story, I momentarily forgot that I’d read it here. This is not to say that there aren’t good stories on this site; but the writing quality and editing was on par with- if not better than - some of the published works I read through my Kindle Unlimited membership. And, the fact that you’ve written a compelling story about relatable characters further justifies my temporary memory lapse. I found ‘Ace of Hearts’ during a reading layover: I’d read every book, novella and bonus scene published by my favorite authors, and was awaiting updates from the various series I follow here. I stumbled across Chapter 4. So I started at the beginning and was hooked by the time I finished Chapter 2. How could I not follow you after that? And I was not disappointed. THANK YOU for bringing these characters to the site!🥰🥰🥰

This series is absolutely phenomenal. I’ve just read it again, and a thought occurred to me: if this is a tribute to bent/bent backwards……could we please have this from Asa’s perspective?? I’d love to hear him wax lyrical about Johnny’s amazing sounding body. And soh, of course. 😉

I HAVE to agree with the comment by Privatelifeprivate. I would love to hear this story from Asa's perspective - I was actually thinking thinking about this the whole time!

This is my second, and it was better than the first read. Love these two guys even though they went through some rough patches. You are a great writer, and when reading who wants to stop till I come to the ending.

Such a great read, thank u for shearing!-D

I know this takes inspiration from Bent but honestly I liked this more! Not that Bent isn't also lovely, but the characters are so much more well developed here and have so much personality, and I love them both so much! This was a lovely read 💖

Absolutely amazing! Loved the humor, very sexy and well written.

I've read Bent many times (I noted the influence, but this is certainly unique) and clearly I'll be doing the same with Ace of Hearts.

What's the chance of getting Asa's point of view?

Great great story.

This has been an AMAZING story. I loved every minute of it. I agree with the others, can we please get another one from Asa's POV?

I've read this several times now and love it more each time. I know you got the inspiration from the Bent/Bent Backwards series, but I really loved this a whole lot more. I hope you come back and write from Asa's point of view and/or write a second part to this series, I want to keep reading! This has the perfect mixture of romance and sex and that's hard to find it seems (at least to my liking lol)

This is one amazing read.

I like it all. From the family relationship, especially with Vivi, to the swooning and the hot sex. I wish I could find more stories like that. Well done - very authentic

Que hermosa historia, gracias!! Me hiciste reír mucho! Y todo lo escrito en español está tan bien hecho.. Que refrescante encontrar eso, no quería que se terminara.. ¿Cuándo públicas un libro? Sin duda mi historia favorita hasta la fecha, abrazo! <3

UHMAZING !!! Please Please give us the rest.