by VictorCabana
...is that no action was taken against the wife and her lover for hustling his kids out of the country.
Liked it a lot, though I felt the subplot with Shannon and the kids could have been cut out. Also, you write nicely, but the purple prose is a bit too much sometimes.
That he didn't do anything against his ex wife and her blackmailing is quite weird. And other parts as well.
This is a wonderful drama, with excellent characters and an intricate plot the is completely engaging. This story is more Romance than it is Erotic Couplings, but in either genre it deserves 5 stars.
Excellent storyline. The only reason I did not give 5 stars is because the ex-wife and kids were left dangling. Did she move to parts unknown. What about the kids he tried so hard to protect? Not even a good bye? Other than that an excellent story
I know that some people actually DO like having fingers and other things shoved up their asses, but I don't find it the least bit sexy.