All Comments on 'Aced'

by VictorCabana

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ju8streadingju8streadingover 4 years ago

could have done without the pegging

BestOfAllWorldsBestOfAllWorldsover 4 years ago
My Only Complaint

...is that no action was taken against the wife and her lover for hustling his kids out of the country.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Liked it a lot, though I felt the subplot with Shannon and the kids could have been cut out. Also, you write nicely, but the purple prose is a bit too much sometimes.

EIoPolizeiEIoPolizeiabout 4 years ago

That he didn't do anything against his ex wife and her blackmailing is quite weird. And other parts as well.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago
great story

This is a wonderful drama, with excellent characters and an intricate plot the is completely engaging. This story is more Romance than it is Erotic Couplings, but in either genre it deserves 5 stars.

ker63469ker63469about 2 years ago

Excellent storyline. The only reason I did not give 5 stars is because the ex-wife and kids were left dangling. Did she move to parts unknown. What about the kids he tried so hard to protect? Not even a good bye? Other than that an excellent story

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I know that some people actually DO like having fingers and other things shoved up their asses, but I don't find it the least bit sexy.

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