All Comments on 'Across the Street'

I like the way you take the time to introduce the characters before they meet.

I hope this story, which was great, is just a stepping stone to longer ones. It would appear that you have the good ideas so let them come out.

You did a very good job. Not only a good story line, but the mechanics are very good, too. Spelling, punctuation, grammar, prose- you worked hard on the nuts and bolts of the project, as well as devising an excellent story. Not crude, but smooth. I liked it very much. Hope this will encourage you to continue writing.