All Comments on 'Across the Street'

I don’t get the hair pulling thing.

I love your writing style. It flows well, and the balance of what you say and what you leave to the reader’s imagination is perfect. The storyline isn’t new of course, none are, but you gave it a different slant. Combine all this with good use of grammar and a lack of typos, and what’s not to like? Thanks

Excellent one of your best yarns.

Loved this one! Well written. I enjoyed how you worked the squirting in naturally without going over the top with it, as well as the slow (relatively speaking) build to the in person sex. Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!

Really great work! She sounds hot! lol! I think I would have preferred a more “tied in a bow” ending. After all, you kinda have them sounding like soulmates.