All Comments on 'Across the Tracks Ch. 05'

by BigCoreySKR

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PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
Nice tension

Sorry to hear about the wrist! Good buildup here, if a bit fast, and looking forward to more.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
too short

but in light of a bad wrist, no problem. love the storyline, and i would guess there is long way to go, hope to see more soon,

DespairEternityDespairEternityover 13 years ago
Love the story so far...hope sequels are coming soon

Loving the story so far. Your style of writing is very addictive. You leave each chapter with us wanting more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
i need more

i need need more i love this story line it is geniiuos

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035over 13 years ago
Happy I found this story again

I read the first 3 chapters a while ago. I founf the other 2 chapters by accident because of your hammer series. I love this story and I hope you write a little more often. I like JB alot and hope he remains clean for his son and maybe his girl.

sirreadsalot10sirreadsalot10about 13 years ago
Nice cliff-hanger!

Now I have to read the next chapter immediately.

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