by Publius68
I was taken aback by the suddenness of Meredith shifting from remote adult to being openly sexual with both her stepdaughter and the boyfriend. Hard to keep the disbelief suspended when it is such a sudden shift. But then again, I thoroughly enjoyed both of the women!
Truly AMAZING. The competition between the two women was so well developed and very well written. I was curious when the martini’s were poured followed by the conversation. I wasn’t sure how far Meredith would go with her blouse …
After that I savoured the build up, the lessons and the volcano’s eruption.
Now I’m hooked!
Absolutely fantastic. I love the level of detail. It looks like the beginning of an amazing potential relationship between these three, unless Meredith is just trying to get Steff to be more aggressive by competing... But I don't think so!
I was sure the dual blowjob was going to turn out to be a fantasy he was having at home that night. Felt like it kind of jumped the gun on what was turning into a delicious slow build. Still, very well done.
Well, that didn't go at all in the direction I expected! Good story, well written and free of the grammar and spelling errors that so often plague even the best stories on Liferotica. I'm looking forward to seeing how the author develops the story and characters.
Holy shit!! That was awesome! Hit that one out of the park. Way out of the park. Always love your work, and I can't wait to continue reading this series. Such great, hot, potential.
It's a shame you write less now, because this barely believable fantasy stuff is the absolute best on here. Hall of fame.