All Comments on 'Activated Pt. 03'

Good story, but you really should have edited this chapter. Some word mistakes made me laugh out loud in places where it wasn't called for.

I know, I know. I do read through them before posting and later I am confused how I let some things get through.

Going to fix them when I reach a good stopping point. I have enough content to get me to chapter 16 written so far. Properly spelled but wrong word errors are the worst. Spellcheck doesn't help with that.

Thank you, I hope you enjoy where I'm going, my original story took me in a different direction then I started with.

Great Series!