All Comments on '"Actually"'

This creative and tantalizing story captured and held my interest...leaving me nice and aroused...hopefully I’ll find more by this author.

Unless you plan on more chapters.

A good storyline, .................... suddenly it stops dead,

what about the ending of it?

If the ending was as good as the beginning, then it would have been a 5 star rating......

It needs to be concluded, .

It was okay in the beginning but it ended terribly. The sex description was very vague. I had to read it again to figure out if they even had sex. 2*

Reading the comments i can only say is that it should have been in the non-erotic or romance category.

Still a 5 star of me