All Comments on 'Adam's Little Sister Ch. 09'

by BatsandGlamour

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WindshadowWindshadowabout 15 years ago
Ronnie???

So what happened to Ronnie????? Did I miss something?

Windshadow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
fucked up

god you fucked this up royal it started good went down hill when the mother joined died when the aunt joined and was buried when she went to work with dad this whole series should have been in the group sex or fantacy area remember "KISS" keep it simple stupid the more people you add to a incest story the less believable it is because there are more people to let it slip out incest needs to be kept to a minimum of people that know and participate do a rewrite and move it to the proper area

BlueEyedSmokeBlueEyedSmokeover 14 years ago
very good some spelling issues

This series was very good. Although I think I stopped reading the first go round the ass licking was a little much for me. The whole thing was good enough for me to read the whole series again! Good stuff, so are the boys going to start taking care of all the ladies now??

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep Going

I just finished reading the series and I loved it. Please keep it going. I would like to find out what happens to this family.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
First time reading your stories - well done!

Pretty hot & well written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Had me peeing and cumming!

It was amazing! I couldn't stop fingering myself until my clit was too sensitive to touch! And before I knew it I was peeing and squirting all over my sheets!

c4vetteman94c4vetteman94about 6 years ago
Ruined it

By adding an outside male. It was going so well. The dp scene could have been with mom and the strap on.

WargamerWargamerabout 3 years ago

Now incest being shared, Bats and Glamour you got to greedy with this story, but shit you ruined it all right

1/5

TEXASMADDOGTEXASMADDOGover 1 year ago

¡¡¡¡Bitch, bitch, bitch!!!! All a lot of y'all do is complain on here...just score the story down and move on!! If you did not like the story...quit reading it!!

The adding of Doug to the story is Susan's idea, not Mark's...she has wanted it almost from the start, and is finally getting her wish fulfilled! Still, not a real fan of an outsider, regardless of how much trust Mark has in him!! Meh, we will see!!

Lots of good, nasty sex; the anal is a little over-the-top, but at least Mark knows to "keep it clean" and not endanger his women with an infection.

Dad has a heart attack...hhhmmm...see where that goes.

Five Stars...barely...cannot feel that this is deteriorating quickly...but, just one more chapter to go, ssssoooooo......

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