by BatsandGlamour
Wow, over 8 years in between parts. That has to be some kind of record. Looking forward to more.
This is a story perfectly told, hot, and made me cum with every chapter. My GF and I read porn to each other--this is a series that I'll ask her to read to me in bed--it's always fun to see how long we can go in our readings before we have to fuck! It could take years to read this series...
Just worked my way through all 10 chapters, and hoping for a continuation of the story.
Finally made it to the end of this great story please don't let it end here
Thanks for a great series. It was fun. As for the idiots who commented on spelling and grammar, this it a story board, not an English lit class. Fuck 'em. Better yet, let me fuck 'em. Still better, let's both f.... whew!! Gotta go ;)
Dont stop here, it was just getting good. This turned me on a whole nother level. I will always remember this saga.
Please continue the story. Let us know if it turns into a fivesome between Ben, Susan, Lynn, Adam and Aunty Venorica, and please make a chapter 7.5 to tell us what happened to Lynn and Aunty Venorica when they were growing up.
Please carry on writing this lovely series, makes my cock harden with each chapter, more brother/sister , mom/son...
Well, I trudged through the ten chapters of this tome; I think I could read War and Peace in less time. Author you certainly have a thing for assholes. How disgusting. My best squeeze & I tried butt-fucking years ago, and we agreed that it wasn't something we needed to do again - it was messy, smelled bad, and for her, it was literally a 'pain in the ass." Add to that that she NEVER came with something up there. Better a good pussy with g-spot and clitoral massage, along with plenty of tit and nipple stimulation. The only thing worse is ATM.
Each to his own, I guess.
Well that's my take on your series. I don't know if I'll read any more of your stuff or not.
Adios
Please keep on writing!!!
Love the story and the characters!
*ever so slightly whispering* I think I noticed a couple of typos... Pay attention to them!
That said, perfection! Can't wait for more!
After Doug joins the sexcapades, can there be some bisexual action between Adam and Doug? Or Adam and his Dad? Or any combination of such?
Have Susan or mom use the strap-on on Adam.
I mean we have already seen bisexual action between Susan and Mom.
Hope he finds happiness and ditches his asshole family, especially the cock whore wife and selfish shit of a son.
Never finished how typical of a failing story, so much promise so much rubbish in the end you stopped it.
1/5
And you stopped writing as well, thank God for small mercies, you will do better in your dat job, trust me.
Learn a bit how incest works before you write about it.
It helps.
OOOHHH, "Wargamer"-you have such bad things to say all over the place here on Literotica...some are good, some are really rotten...makes me wonder...???
This story got **3** stars, because it IS 'AVERAGE'...a little bit, with the sex, but the whole underlying effort...
MMMEEEHHHHHH!! Not really what I look for...
Too bad...may/may not read more of this author...