by Adele_Sissy
What a great first short story. Excellent build up and a hope for part two. Love it.
A little demanding at the end, but an erotic tale deserving of 4 Stars
Looks like it's got series potential.
Congratulation for your first story here on Lit. I think there is a lot of options for a nice series & hope you can keep the story going. IMO, you did a decent job of including the inner thoughts & feelings. I suggest that perhaps you'll get inside the thoughts of Mike. I've found that readers of my own stories appreciate getting that deeper into the thoughts of the main characters. I'm gonna splurge and vote 5 stars ;-)
Wow awesome i love being a sissy alot only been fucked 1 time.i got wet just reading this story.then had to use my toy and fuck myself hard.thanks a lot.
Now Adele is caught in a web of of being controlled. Does Adele go thro with Mike’s demand of being at his house on Saturday night? Will have to wait for the next chapter. Please not toooo long on it’s release.