All Comments on 'Adjusting To Normal Ch. 03'

fantastic chapter I like Michael and really hope he is a good guy. Not sure who to trust so far but I hope he can be trusted. Love the end bit. LOL

Why didn't he fix her injuries I mean she fell down stairs onto concrete and then almost strangled by her necklace and her injuries are all of a sudden forgotten when she leaves her room.

I love this story and its interesting development.

Good job,looking forward to next chapter.

I really find this story gripping and want to know more. I am very intrigued. I only gave this chapter three stars, though, because it felt rushed and a bit choatic. I liked the ending, though. I look forward to reading more! Keep up the good work.

When Michael said.....If she hadn't screwed around on her husband I wouldn't have been born."

I noticed he didn't say screwed around on my father, so I'm thinking that it was her husband that killed her at the start of your story. Although that would leave the question of how his father got him. LOL

Ah well will just have to wait and see where this story goes.

I also think that the blonde bitch might be an undercover cop or something. I get a new theory every chapter. LOL

I just read chapters 1-3 and am now caught up, but I want more. I really like this new story. Your are slowly revealing more history about both Michael and Eliza. And as we learn about their pasts, we learn how they became the persons they are now. I like the pace of the story. While Eliza wants to do things "strictly by the book", Michael seems to live in the more "here and now". And the fact that Eliza is the only one who Micael believes can find the truth only adds great background to the love story unfolding in front of me.

Do I want more, do you even have to ask? Thank You for sharing your new story!!!!!

I'm really enjoying your new story, and I'm surprised by that since I don't normally read in this category. The sappy romantic in me hopes to see a happy ending and not just a passionate romp while it lasts, but I can't wait to see where you take it. Eagerly anticipating your next installment!

Is there a chapter 4 ?

I really enjoyed the story. Was not overjoyed when I found that this was written in 2011 and non since. Will this story continue?

-- Valarie, Dallas Texas

Think I will stop torturing myself and find my reading elsewhere. This site is too frustrating.

This is a fantastic and engaging story. Please come back and finish it!

Love this series and hope you eventually finish, perhaps in 2013?

very wonderfully written. hope u will continue posting and finish the series at the earliest.

She has a complicated life and character. She's an adult with adult strength. She is spectacular. Smart. I would say determined but, when she said she thought they would no longer be working once she moved to his place for the weekend, I wasn't sure. It's like she has not only accepted what was thrown at her she sees it through the eyes of experience.

In the next few chters, my only hope is that you actually finish a good story. So many authors leave one hanging, just as you have done.

I am sad this well written series is completely unfinished.

This really needs to be finished, it is well written.

....this intriguing story ends here. This is literotica.