by Blankslatey
He would and should be furious that his wife saved the best of herself for his boss. His employer got her best and he got shit on by the two of them! He should be angry and hurt, not that she would care because she’s Marcus bitch, not his wife.
Enjoyable, well written and realistic story. A happy ending for everyone: Marcus gets an employee's wife to fuck; Debra gets to regularly enjoy a big cock; and John gets to keep his job, get a raise, become a cuckold and clean up creampies.
"He used my throat until I was horse."?
AMerryman 2.0
However I know for a fact this one is damn near exactly the one I know as a true happening. I am wondering if one of the people in the case that I am aware of is related to one of the individuals.
You know, a good story could be written with all of the conversation details of a wife — or a husband — confessing what had happened, without it going to “I want to watch next time.”
Not the "he noticed me" excuse! Her husband was busy because he was trying to save his fucking job!
"I could see why he was the boss." - Um, being the boss usually doesn't have anything to do with being bossy!
God, not the hypnotized by the big black cock crap!
Then he's a cuck?!
Why is he bothering with divorce papers?
Enjoy your 1 star.
If you are a spineless whimp dicked cuckold. He can forget about ever having his wife back. She made her choice and it isn't the man she married.
the "husband" has been reduced to nothing but a stooge.
he is not a valued employee
he is not a valued lover
he is not a valued husband
he has nothing, and is nothing to everybody
now marcus has no reason not to demote or fire him
now the wife has no reason to even pretend to have sex with him
People who really love each other don't let their spouse fuck other people, kick the bitch out to the curb, she didn't do it to keep his job, she did it because she is a whore.
I have never understood the allure of your wife being with someone else. I was encouraged with the guys anger at the beginning but then the floor fell out. Seriously, dude should be 1 step from inexplicable violence instead of encouraging his should-be-former whore wife. I have always been good about seeing/understanding things from varying points of view, but this I have decided I will never grasp. My personal opinion aside, I hope the cuckold lovers really enjoy this one; it made me ill.
Starts out she's crying and upset that she has destroyed her marriage and is served with divorce papers...
Then she laughs...
Then she floats, emasculates and degrades her husband...
and suddenly, he no longer wants a divorce but transforms into a willing cuckold.
Ugh
...a waste of a few minutes.
A vile, poorly told story. Super.
You never made a convincing case for why Debra feels she just needs to fuck Marcus. He calls her, takes her to dinner, tells her she's his and she just falls in line? Even in a fictional story that just didn't work. In fact, it was just stupid. And since John knows what shes doing and who she's doing, why would he suddenly have a change of heart and want to watch? After all, he's had enough time to think about it and he's filed for a divorce. His job is secure since he'll be naming Marcus in the divorce and threatening to sue Marcus and the Company. Which means Marcus is jobless. You had an idea for this story but you completely failed in the writing. Badly thought out drivel.
1 star
What’s the problem, guys? Would y’all have different opinions if the Boss had been a woman who romanced an employee’s Husband?? I enjoyed the story and look forward to another chapter of this affair!
As bad as the rest of this story is, the unexplained shift of her husband from wanting a divorce to wanting to watch defies comprehension!
If he wanted to watch, why wouldn't he just say that without preparing divorce papers?
Why not just tell her, "I know you're cheating on me, and I want to watch?"
He went from presenting the divorce papers -- which indicates the thought about it rather extensively -- to "But listening to you now..." without a thought, just because of her bullshit story.
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The only difficult truth is that you wrote a shitty story. Actually, it's not all that difficult. It was very apparent this was a shitty story. There's nothing difficult about that.
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BTW, when one paragraph ends with a quotation mark and the very next one starts with a mark, that indicates the character speaking has changed. When one character is speaking and is not uninterrupted by narrative or another character talking, every paragraph starts with a mark, but only the last one has a closing mark. You punctuated her story -- a monologue -- as if it was a conversation.
Difficult to pick the worst story posted today, but the author makes a strong case with this tired , used up, old LW plot. In fact, after this mess, it's exhausted.
I understand some like cuckold stories - I don’t but don’t judge- but when the husband goes from angry and about to divorce into a willing cuckold instantly after wife’s confession makes no sense to me. This isn’t the first and won’t be the last. Its too big of a character twist out of nowhere. As bad as the loving wife who becomes an evil cheating slut wanting to ruin her husband out of nowhere.
where I kept her head under the tub water for 30 minutes, trying to wash her brain clean.
It‘s a bucket worth and not a single piss poor star.
Cheers
Really? @Bebop3 said it all...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
...f*ck off with the ridiculous story line. Sure a boss might make a play for an employee's wife, but there is no way that the employee will accept it.
And so people out there genuinely find this kind of shit erotic.
Man... you guys need some help.
Silly question, but might as well ask it: if John knew nothing, and it certainly seems this way, given how little he turned out to know, why did he have divorce papers ready to go?
Anyway... once again: never make life decision based on how your penis reacts to it. People like John are never smart enough to realize it, but they're always in for some major pain, later on. 'Should have just went for the divorce, you sad cuck.
Unrealistic and quite atrocious. Thanks for nothing, author.
Graphic descriptions of sex. An innocent wife mesmerized by a large, black, penis. A casual distain for her husband's feelings while she describes the 'affair', actually a rape at first. The abject humiliation. It has male cuckold fingerprints all over it. Actually reads pretty well, though.
fucked up. just plain FU!
What does this say about "marriage"? He was going to divorce her until he found out she was only giving her everything to another, so that's okay... WTF!?!
Mentally imbalanced
Well, I'm not a "men," and this is just stupidity. It's racist, in the first place. Then it's extremely degrading to women. We're just complete idiots, walking around waiting for some moron with a giant dong to command us? All we need to see is a giant dong and we lose all higher brain function and our IQ drops 100 points?
There may be size queens out there, but I've never met one. Most of us, women, that is, don't care for pain. Giant dong equals pain, not pleasure. Few women enjoy being degraded, and this was a very degrading story. You are pathological if you would enjoy this in real life, and have some really disturbed fantasies if you enjoy reading about it. It's a lame story, poorly written. Don't blame it on men. Blame it on your own, and this writer's, disturbed thoughts.
You guys should be a bit more supportive of a new author, not destroy their ambitions.
They are just guys/girls at home who want to write a story as a hobby.
I do find that the comments often say more about the commentator than what they are commentating about.
Knowing she liked being dominated he bound and gagged her...but then left her too it. Dumb slut who was stupid enough to go with a lothario (funny spell check offered me 'harlot') even after he was getting other women's' numbers while out with her...didn't think there was anything to worry about.
Next day he went to work and called a meeting with Marcus wherein he blew his cock....well the author would leave it at that...
Blew his cock off.
When arrested he told the police of her predicament and she was released. He was locked away for assault etc though even he eventually was acquitted for a crime of passion, the house and car payments had all fallen into arrears and been repossessed leaving slut to explain to her parents why. Even though it soon became a matter of public record.
Having read it...well up to the point she started to get comfortable telling the tale, I understand the sub 2 mark. Shame, it felt like it could have been a good story for a couple of paras...
Really? I think critics are very truthful about what they read and let you know their opinion. Just because you don't like the comments, doesn't mean they're not valid. Yes reader's define who they are by what they say about the story, but the author also defines himself of what he writes. This story was just plain awful. Kimi1990 hit the nail right on the head and Reed R. had a good point. From confession to I want to watch next time? WTF, this author has a real twisted sense of humor. Willing cuckoldry has always been trash reading for this reader and nothing yet has changed my mind. Don't even bother asking what score I gave this. One has to wonder what goes through an author's mind when he writes this kind of garbage. Yes, garbage or a sick mind.
Instead of the Martian Slut Ray, we have the Venusian Cuck Ray!
Mr. 103x, don't confuse the issue. Cucks have nothing to do with Venus. Everyone knows cucks are from Uranus.
It would be brilliant if this is just to make them comfortable so he could tape it than beat his boss with a bat as he fucks the wife
Us this it for this story or will there be more?
Jeepers, another wimp story.Is there anyone out there can write a story about an husband who doesn't take any shit from his wife and her lovers.
...is 10 inches of baloney. Incredible and worse, not entertaining. One star.
You could have done so much more with this.
men provide resources towards women. that's the marriage contract. women provide sex AND fidelity.
what is the actual point of providing your end of a contract, and she cannot provide her end? in the rare, and i mean RARE cases where women want sex MORE than a
man, she can...idk....tell him! he'll fuck her. he'll 'notice'
his boss didn't 'notice', and his boss wasn't 'an amazing animal'. he's a weaker male that sniffs around other men's wives. it's low class beta shit. an alpha would take her in front of him. his boss was sneaky, it speaks of weakness. it's also very easy to notice a NEW woman, and seduce her. That shit is easy. Raising kids, and paying bills is back breaking. News flash to all the entitled spouses out there, NO ONE enjoys it. Men much would rather be the boss, sneaking around like a snake in the grass, giving fake compliments to insecure women with daddy issues to pump and dump.
let us reverse the script. the husband is secretly providing almost ALL his resources and time in ANOTHER family. He's literally raising another child, and financing another woman. I'm sure his wife would want some of that, but NOPE! he was bored, and yadda yadda, some woman called him up one day, and he began a new family for two years behind her back. their accounts are almost gone, and their home is all but foreclosed on. hot fantasy, right? super hot. in fact, let's make it interracial, you cucks like that shit right? his new wife is a thick ass latina. she's not some lazy white twig in the bedroom. she can actually shake her ass. and she's tight and muscular. she's not soft and doughy. she's a better mother too. it's like non white women are just better at being sexual. omg. it's sooo hot you guys. and the wife, for no apparent reason, cries a lil', and like your cucks....decides within the span of hours how much she wants her hubby to continue cucking her.
on the word "black" in the story and the only response I got back was "black ink". So not sure where the black penis or the racism comes in. (Black ink is now racist is it?)
I would agree that the husband seems to have gone from divorcing to acquiescing rather quickly the moment the wife tells all. But there's nowt so strange as folk.
10 inches? A bit ridiculous of course, I've quoted women who agree with Kimi there though, that they don't actually like that size. And there are white dicks that size! (Just not in Literotica!)
So the real story is about the wife finding the boss attractive, as a man of power, whatever colour he happens to be. The real story is about how she tells herself she is saving her husband's job by doing this as well as having a great fuck: ticking all the boxes at the same time. She even applauds the way the arrogant sod gets the waitress' number at the same time as seducing her. "The fault dear Bruta...... "
This story is erotic (in a kinky way) & realistic.
The storyline was intelligently conceived, but it could have been better crafted.
This story should have been just Ch. 1 of a mini series. If the story had two chapters, Ch. 1 could have ended just after her husband wants to know when she has stopped fucking his boss...
Never happen. Same stupid shit story over and over. Men do not like this garbage. Weird little In-Cels hiding in mommies basement might like and are most likely the losers that write this. Put it in fetish loser.
they should find an island to put all willing cuckolds on it with their slut wives and let them slow die out
Sorry but for some reason gay men living in denial cannot write a good story. Its usually dumber than shit...to the point shit feels like trying ti become a MENSA member.
We get it, you love other mens cum and yet you arent gay. Statistically you are bi at the very least, but arent exactly accepting of it.
Sorry, I know that closet door opening scares the ever lovin shit out of you but open it and please go write the gay stories you truly want and need to write.
She married a woman apparently and she’s a size queen what a bunch of worthless scum
Don't listen to the haters. I have (basically) this EXACT fantasy. Keep writing!