by Holophernes
Have been enjoying your writing style and thanks for writing.
Longer chapters. Also, I am intrigued by what you have in mind for "Pole Position."
Having read all seven chapters of this extremely erotic tale, I have to admit that I enjoyed each one immensely. I will be patiently waiting for your sequel, 'The Pole Position'.
Excellent, unique, and sexy storyline. I must compliment you on your proper use of the English language, both idiom and spelling. Few authors of stories that I have read on this forum, even those availing themselves of the services of editors, have approached the level of well-expressed language as you have. Bravo!