by BirdnFlight
Was a little disappointed how short this was but I'm just hungry for the rest so all is forgiven. This is exactly the kind of stories I like and walking with them through their journey together, every step is a pleasure.
Damn, Juliet's mom is a piece of work. How the mighty shall fall.
So glad these two girls have finally got together. How will things be the morning after? Will they both have regrets? Did Adrienne's mom hear them? lol. Will Adrienne get relief also? Roll on part 4!
The story is continuing to be a very entertaining piece of work. The thing I'm wondering now is will Clarissa try to wreak some nasty vengeance on the girls. Hope we'll find out soon. In the meantime, five more stars.
Loved every syllable of it! Of course it’s way too short but I’ll just try to be satisfied until part 4! There is a part 4 yet to come, yes?
Dear readers. Yes, this installment was short, unlike the others. It just worked out that way, and felt right. I also want to apologize for the errant typos that crept into this version and hope to correct those. Part 4 coming soon.
You have continued this story very nicely and I love how your feeling this story. Your writing is wonderful. As with another comment or I was a little shocked when it came to an end so quickly. You’ve definitely got me hooked, can’t wait to see where J&A take us in this blossoming relationship.
Great story you have here :) Really looking forward to wherever you decide to take this. I will say that getting J's father and A's mother together as well struck me as a little Wildian (Wilde-ish? Wilde-y?), what with everyone suddenly being connected. Maybe that's where that reference in chapter 1 was headed all along?
Great story you’ve started! I love the way it’s developing and can’t wait to see what’s next for them! Great job, please continue 😊
It was short.....but I think perfectly short....you did a beautiful job of tenderly bringing these two together in a lovely, romantic, erotic, tender first time. I'm not sure more story wouldn't have been a distraction....this ended exactly where it should have. I loved it.
What a great story .. thank you !! I can’t wait for the next chapter ! No heartbreak please! Thanks... ❤️❤️
Loved it! continuing on to chapter 4... thanks for sharing it with us!