by barry240646
Although very short, I love it. Great characters and development although short was good. Memories.
Wonderful tale that will draw memories forward for a great many readers.
Well structured.
Well told (written).
A most excellent piece, which can only come from a real memory of someone born 75 yrs. ago. You sound like a very lucky man !!! Also 75, I have a few of those.
Excellent! Finally a story with correct grammar, punctuation and syntax!
I have a cousin that I have had more than a juvenile crush on for years, but sadly, it never developed and at this point in our lives (we are both in our mid-late 50s), will never do so. Besides, she is happily married to her second husband (a good and decent man who I admire and would never disrespect) and successfully ensconced in her second career. While I myself would give anything to have either one of those scenarios, I would not ruin her happiness for my own selfish purposes.