by call_me_dana
but if this is what it leads to I'm tempted to give it a go.
Why do would-be writers forget who, supposedly, are taking part?
"Katrina picked me up in her jacked-up Wrangler and they headed into the forest. "
'Katrina and 'me'! So that SHOULD make it 'and WE headed into the forest'!
Unless there is another, un-named, person present?