All Comments on 'Adventures in Snowmobiling'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
nice

I hope it is going somewhere....

William smythWilliam smythabout 13 years ago
Never been on a snowmobile

but if this is what it leads to I'm tempted to give it a go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Why do would-be writers forget who, supposedly, are taking part?

"Katrina picked me up in her jacked-up Wrangler and they headed into the forest. "

'Katrina and 'me'! So that SHOULD make it 'and WE headed into the forest'!

Unless there is another, un-named, person present?

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I've been writing stories since high school. I even shared a few with my yearbook teacher and got a kiss for endeavors. The stories are from real life experiences and real life fantasies. I write to images I see in day to day life, or wish I did. I hope you enjoy.