by girlhoney
Sarah's playroom is heavenly!
And Jane is the perfect toy for Sarah.....
Excellent erotic story line!
Jane's lovers and Sarah's friends are an intensely lusty crew....
Writing continues to improve....keeping writing!
And, we need to hear about Pam's subsequent dates....all the filthy details!
you lost me at the word "Pet" and I did not read anything about the playroom
Enjoyed the story,my only critic was the way you went from one story to the other without a link to them,would have flowed if Jane had maybe contacted Pam,for Pam to relate her story,then a link would have been established.and would have flowed
But a superb story and your writing is going from strength to strength