All Comments on 'Adventures of a Sales Executive Ch. 05'

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paulthewetcdpaulthewetcdalmost 4 years ago
The Playroom....!

Sarah's playroom is heavenly!

And Jane is the perfect toy for Sarah.....

Excellent erotic story line!

Jane's lovers and Sarah's friends are an intensely lusty crew....

Writing continues to improve....keeping writing!

And, we need to hear about Pam's subsequent dates....all the filthy details!

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 4 years ago

you lost me at the word "Pet" and I did not read anything about the playroom

icaz22icaz22almost 4 years ago
Very good story

Enjoyed the story,my only critic was the way you went from one story to the other without a link to them,would have flowed if Jane had maybe contacted Pam,for Pam to relate her story,then a link would have been established.and would have flowed

But a superb story and your writing is going from strength to strength

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

oh my....

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Hi tall and toned, I am interested in trying to write erotic stories, and maybe making some new friends. Guys, I am now bisexual and want to broaden my sexual horizons, so the only things I will rule out are water sports, toilet, and animals. I am 5 9 tall 34b, 24,36, very l...