All Comments on 'Adventures of Angel Blast Ch. 01'

I laughed several times. Nice work

First time reading an erotica like this and it was really good. Cant wait for more .

Wow! I laughed out loud at this. Thank you!

I thought this was funny and pretty cute and very 'tongue in check' she might get a franchise yet!

This had me cracking up and turned on at the same time. Love your stuff. You're great. Can't wait for more!

You write light/funny yet erotic better than anyone else. “Angel Breasts” was perfect for how stories get twisted, and “I was a lesbian, but this woman was leagues above me in lesbianhood. She was like a gym leader in Pokemon when I didn't even know what a Squirtle was” had me laughing out loud. And yet I found the sex scenes very hot, and the characters likeable/lovable.

Beautiful touch. I want to read a sequel but this will be hard to follow without a letdown. If anyone can do it, you can.

More, please!! :-)))