All Comments on 'Adventures with Older Men Pt. 02'

I like how quickly the story moves when leading up to the actual sex. it paints a pictures and tells us everything we need to know without wasting too much time. My problem is when the cock rubbing starts and then a few lines later he's already fucking in inside. In my opinion that is wayy too fast. There's a lot more to savor in these moments. the unveiling of a cock can be great moment to talk about, the sensations of a handjobs, how the bottom has to reposition to get the cock inside properly, and lots of non verbal communication that can be talked about as well. ... im very picky about this if you couldnt tell. otherwise you do have skill in writing, just savor the actual sex parts more!

I found it hot when he said the finger in his ass reminds him of his stepfather. I hope you also explore what happened with him and the stepfather (who was intrigued by the jockstrap). The story was short I would have liked more.