by 2Xwidderwoman
Loved the emotion in this story and the character development. Will there be a part 2? Would love to see more of these strong characters!
Would like to see this story become chapter one of many!
The larger than life-sized lover, Aeolus/Paul, the passionate young artist Ryan, and the grand scale of the the architecture.
Their love scenes are as varied as the seasons, all at their most intense.
Is 2Xwidderwoman an Ayn Ran fan? I think not. Her writing has too much emotion and depth for that. 2XW's work serves a living, breathing story, not some objectivist treatise.
It strikes me as the literary equivalent of the sketches that the female character makes for the master architect. Deft lines and curves capture the characters' essence. Snatches of dialog further the plot. It's a beautifully crafted piece.