All Comments on 'Aeolus P. Cerigo'

by 2Xwidderwoman

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great story!

Loved the emotion in this story and the character development. Will there be a part 2? Would love to see more of these strong characters!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
What happens next

Would like to see this story become chapter one of many!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I get the feeling you're a big Ayn Rand fan, eh?

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
This is one of my favorites.

The larger than life-sized lover, Aeolus/Paul, the passionate young artist Ryan, and the grand scale of the the architecture.

Their love scenes are as varied as the seasons, all at their most intense.

Is 2Xwidderwoman an Ayn Ran fan? I think not. Her writing has too much emotion and depth for that. 2XW's work serves a living, breathing story, not some objectivist treatise.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeabout 11 years ago
On rereading this story...

It strikes me as the literary equivalent of the sketches that the female character makes for the master architect. Deft lines and curves capture the characters' essence. Snatches of dialog further the plot. It's a beautifully crafted piece.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Fantastic

I’m sad the story has ended.

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