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Gregorius_Lightmouth over 4 years ago

Intriguing but really rough

I can see what you want to do with this story and I like it, but it's really rough in some paragraphs. It needs an editor and a bit of polishing.

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I've decided to put my work online for others to enjoy... after much encouragement from friends. It's a mixed bag of ideas around romance, BDSM, drama, and sex. I try to inject some humor and realism into what I write. A lot fo it does feel like snippets, hoping to pad out so...

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